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First, I really liked the opening. Ashleigh (as a name) threw me off for a moment, but beyond that I was impressed how you established strangeness and a unique setting while still retaining familiarity. I especially liked how you made me relate to and feel connected to Ashleigh before establishing that she was bionic. It made me see her as a person first, which was good because the story hinges a little on relating to her loneliness.

I followed well (Although I have a good understanding of astronomy), and I was certainly intrigued. Would I pick it up at a book store? Depends on my mood. Normally I would not, mainly because it strikes me more as a romance, which is not a preferred genre.

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